Positive: I really like the pose, the fact that her head points in a different direction than her torso makes it very dynamic. I also like that her eyes don´t look at us, that´s pretty dynamic, too. Very good work on the design, her armor fits in perfectly, I like the round shapes. I would love to see a finished pic, because it´s difficult to criticise a piece that´s so sketchy
For improvement: Her ears are not at the same level, I think her left one has to be lower. The shape of the piece of armor at her right breast doesn´t seem to have the same form as the one at her left... I would give her a longer neck, it almost looks like she hasn´t got one All the other stuff I could say belongs to design and style, so I won´t put it in the critique-section
Positive: I really like the pose, the fact that her head points in a different direction than her torso makes it very dynamic. I also like that her eyes don´t look at us, that´s pretty dynamic, too.
Very good work on the design, her armor fits in perfectly, I like the round shapes. I would love to see a finished pic, because it´s difficult to criticise a piece that´s so sketchy
For improvement: Her ears are not at the same level, I think her left one has to be lower. The shape of the piece of armor at her right breast doesn´t seem to have the same form as the one at her left...
I would give her a longer neck, it almost looks like she hasn´t got one
All the other stuff I could say belongs to design and style, so I won´t put it in the critique-section